Saturday, March 20, 2010

Amour

Here is a novice's attempt. Mine. An extension to the post below.

Like red earth and pouring rain
our hearts had mingled.
With dark skies of starless nights
as blankets, too thin.
But then, she rose
Like a bride in gold
For whom you left me. Askew; in woe.

3 comments:

  1. your lines are heart-wreckingly beautiful..

    but i wish that bridge hadn't risen..& he hadn't left yu..so much in woe

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  2. Somehow, the sun-earth-rain or the sun-dew-moon kinda trio is my favorite to write about. The darker side of the beauty that is nature... :)

    Glad you got the plot. Welcome.

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  3. Nice poem Nivedhitha...

    this is gaurav who needs your insights on something, kindly check your facebook msg.

    thanks
    Gaurav

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